Teen Poetry #5 |
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You Can't Hurt Me Anymore |
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ericaisamonkey Member
since 2002-04-04
Posts 51A little town north of nowhere |
Written from a turning point in my life.. I really want to know what you guys think!! ~You Can't Hurt Me Anymore~ I'm lost Within myself, my head My heart is broken Lying on the floor Several pieces missing The tiredness Becomes absolutely unbearable I mope Unaware that I have feelings You stole them from me All of them You took everything All the love I had to give, and You ruined it Ripping my soul to shreds You had your heart broken So you had to break mine too I'm tired of the tears Sick of looking at myself My face so red and flushed Streaked Where the tears ran Off my chin they would fall I can't admit That I love you Because I don't want to I just want that look The look of passion To return to your eyes The wonderful sensation That ran through your touch I want it all back But I've run away Somewhere you will never go You will never find me Because I'm somewhere Lost among souls Like the living Amongst the dead I' so far away now I've driven myself insane It's the only place I feel safe I'm lost and gone Now you can't hurt me anymore |
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akira Member
since 2002-07-13
Posts 79Idaho |
This is beautiful...i can only imagine how much you must be hurting. I'm willing to talk with you, i've been there, and i'd love to read more of your work.... ps..i responded to your posts... Akira |
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sleepymoongirl Member
since 2001-04-19
Posts 157bc canada |
well i think the poem was well written it reflected how you feel i liked it |
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LisaLongLegs New Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 8 |
I think this poem is really good! It flows well, and I hope things get better for you :-( |
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mistic Member
since 2001-05-06
Posts 233Idaho, U.S.A. |
I love all the emotion that comes through in this poem, great job! ![]() |
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