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0 posted 2002-07-11 01:28 AM



I am me, and you are you
Added up, we once made two.
Now we're one and one again
You know if we continued, you'd just feel chained.
Forever my love is something you'll have
I just don't want to have you feeling bad.
I want you so badly, the pain's in plain sight
We both know a year apart is worse than one night.
If you're feeling this horrible, as I know that you are,
Write me a letter, I'll be your bright shining star.
I am hurting too, no matter what that I say
I love you and always will, but isn't it best if we for now both say nay?


*Excuse me, I need to go cry now*

© Copyright 2002 Rhonda Adolph - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-07-11 12:22 PM


no crying, good poem, we'll talk
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2 posted 2002-07-11 02:37 PM


this poem hit me hard, i no what your going though howeva much your heart is telling you 2 say yes your head is saying no and the hardest choise is to listen to the head.
i wish you the best God Bless, Clare

Life is about change,sometimes its painful,sometimes its beautiful,sometimes its both.

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3 posted 2002-07-11 08:05 PM




I'll talk to you tonight, Rhonda. You're in my thoughts and prayers.

Sincerely,
Titus

As I'm out there, walking, searching, for myself, for you.... won't you join me? Let's walk this journey together.

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