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chasing rain Senior Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 737Canada |
And crescent moons Floating in the sky. I wondered how, I wondered why A silly cow could fly. And,"Hey there, sir." With chilly brrs He turned around to see. "Moo." He cried, And then I sighed When snowflies came to me. * * * * * Nothing to understand here, though there's a lil room for comprehension. Written for the pure enjoyment of mortal confusion. ^_^; Enjoy! -Leah- AIM: Oo Snowfly oO [This message has been edited by chasing rain (07-08-2002 11:03 PM).] |
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Deep_Inside Member
since 2002-02-14
Posts 377i can't stop hiding |
i like it. it was fun to read, thanks. |
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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
Leah, are you becomin evil hideous on me? tsk confusin us mere mortals on purpose. should be ashamed of yourself yesh! *grin* I thought this was very cute and whimsical(sp). Loved the rhyme scheme and the Mother Goose feel too it. Hey Diddle diddle. *hop* see you sweetie. wub mucho -tiff- “A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.” |
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Skyfire 
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
"Written for the pure enjoyment of mortal confusion" Mortal confusion indeed, but also mortal enjoyment. I always love reading your work  |
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