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CwboyAtHeart
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since 2001-04-14
Posts 541
Selah, WA, USA

0 posted 2002-07-03 09:42 PM


I wrote this one about my friend...  She lives across the country and it hurts to see her having problems and going through troubles.  It's totally different than anything I think I've ever written...  Just kinda rambling thoughts.  Anyway, let me know what you think.


ITS GOING TO BE OKAY

Your life is hard
I know that
We're complete opposites
I know that too

He may be more like you
But he can't give you
What it is that you need

You need someone to love you
Someone to give you hope
Not someone that will give you assistance
In your attempts at suicide

I wish I could be there to show you the way
I'll be your friend and talk you through everything you need
I wish I could hold you
And tell you everything is going to be alright...
But I can't

We might be opposites
But that's okay

I just want to be able to give you what you need
To hold you and to tell you that everything
Is going to be okay

Because I promise it's going to be okay



      - Cody -

Note To Self:  If Pigs Can Fly, So Can I!!!

If someboy laughs at me, does that make me funny or just plain stupid?  

[This message has been edited by CwboyAtHeart (07-03-2002 09:44 PM).]

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FAITHy
New Member
since 2002-06-26
Posts 9
NE
1 posted 2002-07-04 02:54 AM


i think that your friend is lucky to have someone like you. That poem was cute i liked it! ~faith
munchkins
New Member
since 2002-07-04
Posts 5

2 posted 2002-07-05 05:32 AM


yer i think ur poem is good and she is lucky that u r there for her...has she read it????i think that u have put out ur thoughts in a great way and many ppl can relate to that in some form!well done.
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