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It's Going To Be Okay
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It's Going To Be Okay |
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CwboyAtHeart Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 541Selah, WA, USA 
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I wrote this one about my friend... She lives across the country and it hurts to see her having problems and going through troubles. It's totally different than anything I think I've ever written... Just kinda rambling thoughts. Anyway, let me know what you think. ITS GOING TO BE OKAY Your life is hard I know that We're complete opposites I know that too He may be more like you But he can't give you What it is that you need You need someone to love you Someone to give you hope Not someone that will give you assistance In your attempts at suicide I wish I could be there to show you the way I'll be your friend and talk you through everything you need I wish I could hold you And tell you everything is going to be alright... But I can't We might be opposites But that's okay I just want to be able to give you what you need To hold you and to tell you that everything Is going to be okay Because I promise it's going to be okay - Cody - Note To Self: If Pigs Can Fly, So Can I!!! If someboy laughs at me, does that make me funny or just plain stupid? [This message has been edited by CwboyAtHeart (07-03-2002 09:44 PM).] |
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FAITHy New Member
since 2002-06-26
Posts 9NE |
i think that your friend is lucky to have someone like you. That poem was cute i liked it! ~faith |
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munchkins New Member
since 2002-07-04
Posts 5 |
yer i think ur poem is good and she is lucky that u r there for her...has she read it????i think that u have put out ur thoughts in a great way and many ppl can relate to that in some form!well done. |
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