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curlygurly
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0 posted 2002-07-03 04:49 PM


I based this poem on a story my cousin recently told me about a former girlfriend. hopefully i can properly represent his story!

At sixteen life was great
driving, girls,
school sucked, but it does for everyone.
One day I came home and the news struck
Why did he have to do it?
Why couldn't my own brother talk to me?
Why'd he have to kill himself?
After months of pain and guilt, i fell in love
Her name was Michelle, and she was gorgeous
I graduated high school.
Everything was perfect.
A few years later, the magical moment happened:
I got down on one knee,
She started to cry.
We moved in together
and life couldn't get any better.
We were so in love and happy for 6 years.
Until I found out her little secret
How could I have ever trusted her?
How could she deceive me in such a way?
How could she have been cheating on me
and I never figured it out?
Do I deserve so much heartache?

"Don't be ashamed to cry, let me see you through, cuz i've seen the dark side too" The Pretenders

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1 posted 2002-07-05 05:24 PM


This is a really bad circumstance to be in.
All I can say though, is always fight and never give up
Suicide is the easy way out, and shouldn't even be part of the equation
Nothing in life is easy, and we all have and are still learning that
thanks for the share

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?
Nelly Furtado é a menina a mais bonita no mundo largo do todo.


MidnightSon
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since 2002-05-15
Posts 312
between the gutter & the stars
2 posted 2002-07-08 05:06 AM


no one deserves the crap they go though, but we have to make it through anyway.
he'll make it out.

it's our struggle for identity that leaves us all unknown

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