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sillywilly
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0 posted 2002-07-01 10:06 AM



So today they know the truth,
How the virgin Mary fell
Only they see it as a way to punish her
For what they suffered when they fell.
They yell and complain and accuse
Yet she does not feel ashamed.
Some refuse to see the new Mary, the real Mary
Who knew she could be so human, yet not at all?
Do they realize they only hurt themselves?
Could she tell them the truth and they truly    
comprehend?
Mary knows the ways of the world now
She knows all about the game, and as much as they
would enjoy it -
Mary won't play.


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LCBS
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since 2001-11-29
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1 posted 2002-07-01 11:52 AM


I'm not sure of the meaning behind this peice, but I enjoyed it very much


~LCBS

Match
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2 posted 2002-07-01 04:23 PM


That was really good
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3 posted 2002-07-03 05:05 AM


that was a great poem i really liked it!

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