Teen Poetry #5 |
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Those Latino Shores |
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Tess7 New Member
since 2002-06-30
Posts 4 |
I was angry with me I was nervous with you I never really said how I feel And I know what you thought But you were certainly wrong And I should have tried to tell you how I feel 'Cause it was your wrong thoughts That changed your mind And eventually drove you away. You thought that you knew, You thought it was love, But it never got that far for me. I'm just a girl Who wanted a friend You mistook it for something else. I didn't want to trap you, But I'm a sensitive girl, And I'm sad that you're gone from my life. The sunset, the beach, the rolling waves On those Latino shores, The timeless week that passed us by Where the pieces of a broken me lie. I am wounded I am damaged I am broken By you. I had so much spirit I had so much strength You said that I'd be a star. I had my ideas I played my guitar But as soon as you'd said goodbye, There was something that cracked And something that gave And these days I just can't believe. Time passes by And scars sometimes heal, But I'm hoping one day you'll return, So this void can be filled And this broken mind fixed 'Cause I know I'll never forget. I felt so rejected I felt so ignored By a man who I thought was my friend. The sunset, the beach, the rolling waves On those Latino shores The timeless week that passed us by Where the pieces of a broken me lie. I am wounded I am damaged I am broken By you. |
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punkrockerrobin![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
wow i really liked this one awesome work!! keep it up! robin |
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Who iis she Junior Member
since 2002-05-14
Posts 41Some where over the rainbow |
This poem was so good i rally liked it. If history has taught us one true thing is that no Species can last forever... |
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Who iis she Junior Member
since 2002-05-14
Posts 41Some where over the rainbow |
This poem was really good. I like what you are saying.Enjoyed Reading it. -Erica If history has taught us one true thing is that no Species can last forever... |
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