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Tess7
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0 posted 2002-06-30 05:45 PM


I was angry with me
I was nervous with you
I never really said how I feel
And I know what you thought
But you were certainly wrong
And I should have tried to tell you how I feel
'Cause it was your wrong thoughts
That changed your mind
And eventually drove you away.

You thought that you knew,
You thought it was love,
But it never got that far for me.
I'm just a girl
Who wanted a friend
You mistook it for something else.
I didn't want to trap you,
But I'm a sensitive girl,
And I'm sad that you're gone from my life.

The sunset, the beach, the rolling waves
On those Latino shores,
The timeless week that passed us by
Where the pieces of a broken me lie.
I am wounded
I am damaged
I am broken
By you.

I had so much spirit
I had so much strength
You said that I'd be a star.
I had my ideas
I played my guitar
But as soon as you'd said goodbye,
There was something that cracked
And something that gave
And these days I just can't believe.

Time passes by
And scars sometimes heal,
But I'm hoping one day you'll return,
So this void can be filled
And this broken mind fixed
'Cause I know I'll never forget.
I felt so rejected
I felt so ignored
By a man who I thought was my friend.

The sunset, the beach, the rolling waves
On those Latino shores
The timeless week that passed us by
Where the pieces of a broken me lie.
I am wounded
I am damaged
I am broken
By you.

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1 posted 2002-06-30 05:54 PM


wow i really liked this one awesome work!! keep it up!
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Who iis she
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since 2002-05-14
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Some where over the rainbow
2 posted 2002-06-30 09:32 PM


This poem was so good i rally liked it.

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Who iis she
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Some where over the rainbow
3 posted 2002-06-30 09:35 PM


This poem was really good. I like what you are saying.Enjoyed Reading it.
-Erica

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