I want to paint the world yellow...

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I want to paint the world yellow...

Master
Senior Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

0 posted 2002-06-30 12:54 PM

I want to paint the world yellow
and yell at
the top of my lungs
from the rooftops in tongues…
Hereafter,
I want to catch laughter
by its tail,
unveil-
ing
spring
by a pulling a thread of its dress.
I want to learn to caress
the lips
that lisp
words of passion
and ash
my cigarette on the stone-cold by-line,--
on the evening skyline.

Check out my poetry here:

http://www.unknownpoets.com/db/authors/master

[This message has been edited by Master (06-30-2002 04:09 PM).]

chasing rain
Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 737
Canada

1 posted 2002-06-30 03:58 PM

Master-*

A simple and charming piece, thoroughly enjoyed.
You write this in such a carefree way, it's refreshing.
The imagery is so realistic, yet you describe it so that it takes on an abstract, surreal form.
Wonderfully done! Hope to see more like this!

Leah

chasing rain
Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 737
Canada

2 posted 2002-06-30 03:59 PM

Oops. o_O; Forgot something...^^ Don't mind me.

punkrockerrobin

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since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

3 posted 2002-07-03 04:38 AM

hey nice write thanks for sharin.

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