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Valley of Fears3# |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada 
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Hi I've been gone awhile. hop everyone is well. excuse the typos i only have my left arm to type with for a while. THE ACCIDENT Where do I go from here sickness in a car drunk in pain Perhaps you do not know where the world ends and where it begins I got a gift lying in a stiff sick bed quill and paper the old fashioned way Broken bones one arm useless right now, call back later I'm writing a masterpiece a letter, a word, a sentence, a story hence forth....is the words of the prelude a feathered quill tickles the soft underside of my bruised eye tis not the pain that hurts me so but it is the question that I pose a million times wether i should suffer? or should I recite tis not the smiles that warm my heart but tis the warm emrace of a friend by my side A true story of a girl who found a place found a true friend who never left This accident the fear the phobia of losing everything losing when holding your hand this final feeling of fear consumes me eats at me The suffocation of sitting in a car The fear, the phobia the pain you all caused me Regina If you only understood my pain then maybe you could learn to be my friend. Be there. My crying shoulder. The smiles. And the caring i need to survive. |
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Low Man's Lyric Member
since 2001-04-03
Posts 236In a dream |
This is a beautiful peom Ina, I really enjoyed it and i hope your arm gets better. "Right now I'm having amnesia and deja vu at the same time. I think I've forgotten this before." |
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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
ooo regina i hope ur ok. *hugs* but for the poem...ahh yet another great piece of this series to add to my library. i enjoyed this alot. great thoughts in it. great job hun. get well soon! tiff  “A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.” |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
i enjoyed this as well...very nicely written thoughts, Ina  ...quite beautiful.[This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 07-14-2001).] |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
thanks. im getting better. i apreciate your replies |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
WONDERFUL work, Regi! This is a beautiful poem... really fantastic display of your talent. I'm looking forward to the next in the series. --Marie You can’t expect the roses to grow without the weeds. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Valley of Fears? *shudders* I really liked this one. Regi, you did really awesome here. Great powerful poem!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
One arm?! Ack!! *hugs* I hope everything is alright with you now. somehow this one was missed when I was replying to all the others in this series. It has become quite enjoyable. The ending in this really suited the piece well. You don't often find that.  Thanks for sharing this Regi and like I said, hopefully everything is alright now. ~AF~ Tearless grief bleeds inwardly. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
hey Ina, what happened? one arm and bruised eye? hope things are better I know I'm kinda late on this *hugs* hi Sweets, Lizzy, Kris, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Mare |
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