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ANGELBABY
Junior Member

since 2001-09-01

Posts 25

0 posted 2002-06-06 04:13 PM

The first time i saw you my heart dropped
it felt like you reached in a crabbed it right out of my chest!
The first time you kissed me it was a kiss i will never forgett, so perfect so true!
The first time you gave me one rose and then two it was so sweet, the look you had on your face one i won't forgett!
But the first time you lied to me i was not expecting it, not from you!
The first time i gave you a chance to try it all over again, but all you did was lie again!
The first time i can honestly say i let you go is now!
The first time i feel free, because you are gone!
No more first time for anything your finally gone, i don't need, and don't want you!
The first time was sweet, but the last time we will never know!

written about an ex my first love but it's finally over!!!

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

1 posted 2002-06-06 05:02 PM

Well done. I liked this poem. It helps me see some point of views from a teenage woman's perspective. I enjoyed it thoroughly.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

Mon Cherie

Senior Member

since 2001-10-31

Posts 922
Land of Never-ending Summers

2 posted 2002-06-07 10:30 AM

Way to go girl!!

I think that's the way in love. It may seem cruel to some or cold to others. They may ask why you're not giving him another chance to work this relationship out. But there is just so many times that you can take lies from him, that you can give him chances. Let go before you get burnt.

_,,,^.^,,,_
Florence

~*brittt*~
Member

since 2001-05-09

Posts 76
East Haddam, CT

3 posted 2002-06-07 10:42 AM

wow, way to go. if someone lies to you like that then there is no way that they deserve you. you write with so much emothion! great job!

Jenn Cirrincione

Member Elite

since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

4 posted 2002-06-07 01:51 PM

Great emotion.
Relationships can be a pill sometimes- well almost all of the time. lol
Powerful strength here.

Jenn

Why is it that we are at our most ingenius only when trying to destroy the things that keep us alive and thriving?

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