Teen Poetry #5 |
i love him and not you |
lilibeelee Member
since 2001-07-12
Posts 143 |
I love him and not you iam stuck in this situation and i dont know what to do I like you as a friend thats about all i feel I know u have been wating for me to find out the deal I dont know what is wrong with me I dont know why i cant just see who is the right one I thought i was done I told myself i dont want to date another guy But i know and u know that is a big lie now iam stuck in the middle of this I know i shouldnt of lead u on with a kiss I know how much it really does hurt I dont love you so i started to flirt I know how it must feel I know this beacuse me to myself ive been through this ordeal A guy kissed me and lead me on I told him i wanted this realtionship with us to last long All my wishes all of my hopes Went down hill down the slopes How come im turing the tabels how come im doing this to you I know I dont know what to do I know i told you all these things I know how much pain this brings I cant belive what iam about to do Iam sorry I cannot be with you You love me more then words can say Iam sorry i cant be with you today I dont love you like you love me That by now you can plainly see I thought i was in love the feeling i had for you fit me like a glove I cant sit here any longer and lie This whole thing makes me want to cry I was just so confused I didnt know what the hell i should do iam sorry i said i love you I relize now how much pain those words can bring I gaurentee you u were never just a 2 week thing I respect you i trust you I like you I will leave me alone if u want me too I am so afraid of hurting you |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
I like the way you express what you're really feeling!! I like it a lot!! Keep it up! Rhonda "Amy, can you PLEASE come to Spain with us so that we have someone to keep Rhonda calm?" - Mr. Ardiel *insert hysterical laughter from me here* |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
emotional poem...heartfelt as well...very nicely done. im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
Perhaps you should show this to the person. Nice Write. |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
I relate waaaaay too much to this. *sigh* I could really feel thi poem. Nice job. Jenn |
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Angelwings Member
since 1999-08-27
Posts 222IL, USA |
Wonderful poem! Thanks for sharing. It's full of emotion and easy to relate to. I look forward to hearing your next one. I hope things get better for you. *that what does not kill us makes us stronger!* |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Ah yes. Love stings but not loving someone back can really damamge a person. Hopefully things will look up for you soon. ~AF~ Psychopathic chickens are plotting against me... |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Ahh! Awful situation. Pretty sticky... nice work on the poem. The description of the situation was well done. Good luck on figuring this out... I enjoyed this I look forward to reading more, soon! --Marie You can’t expect the roses to grow without the weeds. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I liked the poem but recomend you use punctuation. I enjoyed the poem. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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