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lilibeelee
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0 posted 2001-07-12 10:57 PM


I love him and not you  iam stuck in this situation and i dont know what to do
I like you as a friend thats about all
i feel I know u have been wating for me
to find out the deal I dont know what is wrong with me I dont know why i cant just
see  who is the right one  I thought i was done
I told myself i dont want to date another guy
But i know and u know that is a big lie  now iam stuck in the middle of this  
I know i shouldnt of lead u on with a kiss  I know how much it really does hurt
I dont love you so i started to flirt  I know how it must feel
I know this beacuse me to myself ive been through this ordeal
A guy kissed me and lead me on
I told him i wanted this realtionship with us to last long
All my wishes all of my hopes  Went down hill down the slopes
How come im turing the tabels how come im doing this to you
I know I dont know what to do  I know i told you all these things
I know how much pain this brings  I cant belive what iam about to do
Iam sorry I cannot be with you You  love me more then words can say
Iam sorry i cant be with you today  I dont love you like you love me  
That by now you can plainly see  I thought i was in love  
the feeling i had for you fit me like a glove
I cant sit here any longer and lie  This whole thing makes me want to cry
I was just so confused I didnt know what the hell i should do
iam sorry i said i love you  I relize now how much pain those words can bring
I gaurentee you u were never just a 2 week thing  
I respect you i trust you I like you  I will leave me alone if u want me too
I am so afraid of hurting you

© Copyright 2001 Lisa - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-07-12 11:40 PM


I like the way you express what you're really feeling!! I like it a lot!! Keep it up!

Rhonda

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2 posted 2001-07-13 02:29 AM


emotional poem...heartfelt as well...very nicely done.

im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

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3 posted 2001-07-13 02:56 PM


Perhaps you should show this to the person.
Nice Write.

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4 posted 2001-07-13 06:23 PM


I relate waaaaay too much to this. *sigh* I could really feel thi poem. Nice job.

Jenn

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5 posted 2001-07-14 03:20 AM


Wonderful poem!  Thanks for sharing.  It's full of emotion and easy to relate to. I look forward to hearing your next one.  I hope things get better for you.

*that what does not kill us makes us stronger!*

*Everyone can deal with pain in their own way, some things are just harder than others!*

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6 posted 2001-07-15 03:23 AM


Ah yes. Love stings but not loving someone back can really damamge a person. Hopefully things will look up for you soon.

~AF~

Psychopathic chickens are plotting against me...

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7 posted 2001-07-16 02:56 AM


Ahh!  Awful situation.  Pretty sticky... nice work on the poem.  The description of the situation was well done.  Good luck on figuring this out...
I enjoyed this    I look forward to reading more, soon!  

--Marie

You can’t expect the roses to grow without the weeds.

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8 posted 2001-07-17 07:52 PM


I liked the poem but recomend you use punctuation. I enjoyed the poem.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

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