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vipersumo Junior Member
since 2002-05-17
Posts 10 |
Hey ya'll!!! this is my first post here so i dont really kno the ropes yet...but gimme a chance...thanks!!! ~vipersumo Shadows Shadows drop over the path My path on the way home Once filled with a confident light Now left alone. Darkness consumes the worn trail Footsteps all alone Trying to find the way Away from the unknown. I stand against my judgment And continue to press on But when I think I see the light I get there and it is gone. |
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Who iis she Junior Member
since 2002-05-14
Posts 41Some where over the rainbow |
Heyy Your poem is great!::High five:: I am new too! Well nice poem..Keep it up and welcome to pipTalks! Τ׺·. .·º ËriÇ康. .·º×¤Î |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Great first post!! I look forward to more from you. Welcome to PIP.  Jenn Ps. Check your email for a greeting Why is it that we are at our most ingenius only when trying to destroy the things that keep us alive and thriving? |
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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
Love the message behind this. Good word usage and good flow. You wrote this well. Cant wait to read more from you. Welcome to PIP. ~tiff “A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.” |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Nice job, welcome, I hope you enjoy it here "Be kind for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle" Plato. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
the last two lines hit it for me..lights can be taunting, yup? and welcome to passions |
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