Teen Poetry #5 |
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i cry for you |
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corey14 Member
since 2001-05-23
Posts 89Boston, Mass, U.S.A. |
i am crying because i love you and knowing i cant have you and never will crying because you mess w/ me because i cant take it take it anymore just stop it it hurts inside to not know please tell me let me know what you think let me stop crying and not wanting to know because i know it will make me cry even more just because i cant take it let me know stop this pain that i feel what did i do all i ever wanted was you i love you more than words can describe |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
All I can say is stay strong Thanks for the read Hope to see more of your work in the future thanks là où est mon amour? |
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inspiredpoetwriter Member
since 2002-01-05
Posts 104Minnesota |
Good poem i agree keep strong, veddy well writen hon! °•Ang•° :) :Smile: ¥¤¥¤¥¥¤¥¤¥iM a PoEt WhO wRiTeZ Wit HeR Heart ¥¤¥¤¥¥¤¥¤¥ |
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MidnightSon Member
since 2002-05-15
Posts 312between the gutter & the stars |
ask her. the pain of knowng is easier to move on from. "The soul is oftentimes a battlefield where reason and judgement wage war on passion and appetite." |
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since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
aww sweety i understand your pain all too well...::hugs::...i hope you feel better soon..but if it helps any, the poem was great and you expressed yourself really really well!! iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf.. |
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