Teen Poetry #5 |
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lilibeelee Member
since 2001-07-12
Posts 143 |
Feelings of Pain locked up inside Feelings inside that are hard to hide I don't know how much more I can take My life feels like a bridge thats about to break Just when I think my problems are gone Something happens to me and just goes wrong I wish I was brave I wish I was stronger I can't take this anymore not any longer Sometimes people push me so near to the edge Each time they push I get closer to the ledge I want to run away without 1 good-bye Iam tired of these questions of how come and why I dont want to deal with this no more thats why iam walking out that door No more of this I give up Iam done Iam tired of this confusion Iam starting to run Iam doing the best that I can do My bridge is broken right into two |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Hey, I know this feeling, it gets better. ![]() ![]() |
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anonymous albert ?![]()
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
i relate to this...you expressed yourself nicely...i liked the poem ![]() im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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Heavens Tears![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-15
Posts 677 |
Great poem. It is full of emotion. I see all of your locked posts, but dont worry, they will unlock soon. *Amanda* |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I enjoyed this poem muchly. Well done on this one. I hope to see more from u. ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
I know how it feels Good job Bel |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Seems like everyone is having a heartbreak lately I hope things brighten up for you soon *hugs* hi Sweets, Lizzy, Kris, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Mare |
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Fading Away![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
I agree with acire.. this forum is full of lots love. Thanks for sharing this.. I'm sorry you're hurting. It'll get better. GIve it time. Nicely written poem ![]() --Marie You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning. |
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