Teen Poetry #5 |
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Just Like Rain |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
Sorrow melting my heart, tears dripping down my face, just like rain. Mirrors shattering, as again we fight, just bad luck. Arguments cause tears, tears put me to sleep, just like rain. ~if you want me to fall for you, you gotta give me something worth tripping over~ |
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Jenn Cirrincione![]() ![]()
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Hmm, interesting. This was short, but effective. Sad, really. Jenn "I can't get you out of my head- your love is all I think about." |
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Punk Angel Member
since 2001-07-25
Posts 66Pennsylvania, US |
yeah this one WAS effective...but im tellin u....GET OVER HIM!!! geeze!! i mean....DDDDUUUUHHHH!!!! he only hurts u EVERYDAY!!! srry? lol luv ya ~kris We love what is lost, but does what we lost love us back?? |
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peachesNcream Senior Member
since 2001-08-21
Posts 513Ocean Of Tears |
wowwwwwwweeeeee!!!!!! dats weally good..i have an idea who its bout..but not sure! good write! ~Jess *-LiFe TaKeZ uR DrEaMz aNd TuRnZ tHeM uPsIdE dOwN..FrIeNdZ TaLk AbOuT U WhEn uR nOT aRoUnD..PeOpLe MaKe PrOmIsEz THeY JuST CaN'T KeEp..& i'Ve cOmE tO |
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Cinderelly Member
since 2001-12-31
Posts 189NM, USA |
I agree w/ the other replys . . . This is an effective poem, a really sad one @ that. Great poem. ![]() Life is a moderately good play w/ a badly written thrid act. - Unknown |
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