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lilibeelee
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since 2001-07-12

Posts 143

0 posted 2001-07-12 10:27 PM

feelings so overwelming so hard to hold inside
feelings so incredable so hard for me to hide
A question you asked me, my heart skiped a beat
A feeling over came me, I was light on my feet
A feeling ran through me so undrescribable so unreal
A feeling inside my heart I knew it was real
You told me your feelings what you felt in your heart and thoughts in your mind
It's funny beacause each one of those thoughts and feelings was excatly the same
as mine I felt like it was a dream a dream it wasnt it was real
I know in my heart today how I feel I look down at my hand down at my ring
I love you so much how much joy you do bring
I never thought a soul could love me like you do
I never thought I would hear the words I love you
I never thought I could ever be this lucky to have an angel right beside me
I feel like I should be here like this for eternity
It's how strange how things all come together
It feels like me and you were ment for eacother
The struggles the trails the mountains Ive overcome
It seems like forever it took to find the right one
But finaly I have found my soul mate my bestfriend
Finaly i have found someone i want to be with forever till the end
I have found that someone that someone i wished for
When I did he was everything I wanted and more I couldnt ask for a greater gift
If iam ever sad my spirts he will lift
I am so thankfull to enjoy my life with him forever
Thank you god for us being able to spend the rest of our lifes together

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

1 posted 2001-07-14 03:38 PM

This poem is simply amazing

I'm glad to see someone as happy and greatful as you seem to be in this poem. More power to both of you. Thanks for sharing.

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anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

2 posted 2001-07-14 08:46 PM

...your lucky and your poems have much emotions in them all...enjoyed this one as well.

im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

Spice
Senior Member

since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

3 posted 2001-07-14 11:30 PM

Okay THIS I liked bunches. This is the best I've seen from you today. WONDERFUL! Your emotions come pouring through! My only critique is the punctuation thing again.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2001-07-15 05:50 AM

I liked this one. I thought it was a very good poem.
Well done here!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

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