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chase the rain (a new life)...(please comment)
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chase the rain (a new life)...(please comment) |
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SlowDrag Member
since 2002-01-10
Posts 53Tx...need i say more |
Just another one of my songs....but this did almost make me cry when i wrote it....it's kind of my goodbye to highschool and my friends and everything here...but it's also about new beginnings. In this life there's so much pain watch the light chase the rain feel the rain washing away your soul it's still not the same god only knows... I've changed my mind i dont want to be me changed my life... what's beyond what i see? i chase the rain it washes away my soul something's not the same forget all i know... chase the rain chase the rain chase the rain chase the rain... You don’t know What I know Or maybe what I knew. But now all I can think about Is a song I want to sing to you… Chase the rain You’ll find something brand new Chase the rain… And make your dreams come to you chase it away On to some other day The sky is brand new… It’s waiting for you……(fade out).... |
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chasing rain Senior Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 737Canada |
YAY!!! Yes...chase the rain. ^_^ Finally, someone wrote about me. =P I'm kidding...^^ A very well written lyric poem, strong in words and flow. Thanks for sharing! ^^ -Leah |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
wow, i really liked this alot, lol WOW! great job!  ~if you want me to fall for you, you gotta give me something worth tripping over~ |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Cool. I could just feel the sadness of leaving friends. I graduated last year, and it can be difficult changing like that. Jenn "I can't get you out of my head- your love is all I think about." |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
awww yay i liked this one so much!! Your a very talented song writer my friend!! iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf.. |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
Great post....I liked it, wonder what the music sounds like now. It'll be a great song  Hope to read more of your posts Salma |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
The words you have there definitely sounds wonderful!! Now, I'd really love to hear the music for it. _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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