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Lisa_bebe15
Member

since 2001-11-15

Posts 151
Florida

0 posted 2002-05-01 12:27 PM

Don’t think I don’t love you,
How can I prove to you,
That my love is for real?
My love works in a weird ways.
Never do I love someone in the same way,
The same fashion.
Always loving someone else in a different way.
But once I love,
You will never leave my heart,
My life.
Always staying around.

You cannot ask for my love,
It just happens.
I love you, I love you not.
If I say I love you,
I love you always and forever.
If you ever disbelieve my love,
Come straight to me,
And I will prove you so wrong.

Don't ask for a letter with my love attached.
Love cannot be sent in a letter,
Nor left in the rain to melt.
When it rains go outside,
Before the storm is over,
Or you won’t catch my love.
As my love is like the rain drops,
With in each drop,
Contains a piece of my love
Falling from the sky.
If you are lucky,
The sun will hit my love just right
And a rainbow will appear in the sky,
To prove my love is always there.

My love cannot be touched,
It’s not an object,
Not a thing.
You can see my love from me,
But never will it leave your sight.
Think of me always loving you,
In your arms.
Even though you are far away from me,
I hope my love still reaches out to you
For now, and forever
My love is true
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I just found out how the word "love" can effect certin people. I just had to say that. Don't say love if you don't mean it..But boo, when I say I love you, I am true to my word!

"Water Over Matter"

Dunphy
Member

since 2002-03-14

Posts 82
Massachusetts USA

1 posted 2002-05-02 01:50 PM

i like ur poem it's really inspierin you know. showin ur feelins iss so very true these days but hawd to do. well thanx 4 the nice read i enojyed it.

love dunphy
kevin jordan

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

2 posted 2002-05-02 01:55 PM

Wow, this is relating a lot to my life right now. I enjoyed this a lot..your very good at expressing yourself through your poems. You did a great job here..thanks for sharing!

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

3 posted 2002-05-07 04:42 AM

Lisa-
This is absolutely beautiful!
Wonderful choice of words to express your love,
and the imagery is incredible!
You are an extremely talented poet.
I LOVE this write!
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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