Teen Poetry #5 |
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Waiting |
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Jenn Cirrincione![]() ![]()
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl ![]() |
Through the tears, and though the haze- I understand, we need some space. A beautiful heart- beating only for mine. And all this I know- it's not the right time. I'm not ready for love, not ready for your graces. Still wanting to see- those unfamiliar places. I've held you so close, it was hard for me to see. I was being so selfish- and you need more than me. I'll love you forever, this always true. If we're meant to be- than I'll wait for you. "I can't get you out of my head- your love is all I think about." |
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PoetryIsLife![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
Jenn, nicely done. This reminds me somewhat of a situation I've gone through. So, thus I can relate. "I'm not ready for love, not ready for your graces." ![]() ![]() I especially like the four line stanzas and the amount of stanzas. Good choices there. ![]() Sincerely, Titus Every second that passes you are one second older. You'll never get that second back. |
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fearing-laughter Senior Member
since 2001-04-24
Posts 605land of cheese (Wisconsin) |
~jenn i sort of have mixed feelings about this poem...the beginning is sad and wistful, but i like the hope at the end. well done. -bergundy- maybe i'll catch fire, something nice to warm me. something pure to burn away the darkness, that hides inside my mind. -alkaline trio- |
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Jenn Cirrincione![]() ![]()
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
This poem is written straight out of this corner of my heart. It's very very personal to me; most of my poetry is, but yeah... this is right there. Thank you for reading. "I can't get you out of my head- your love is all I think about." |
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xShUgArHiGhx![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
This was a great poem jenn. Its hard to not be selfish and make the decision to let someone go. You did a very strong thing...wonderful poem. iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf.. |
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Tamma![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV |
Jenn - this was soo cool - exactly how i felt when "Justin Michael" broke up with me, last year...I still care about him...but back in Feb, when he tryed to get back with me, i had to tell him "no" sometimes its funny how things turn out...Good luck ~ Tamma Have you ever heard that "No shirt, No shoes" rule? My question is...Why doesn't that rule include pants? |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
This is really sweet hoping the best for you Jenn thanks for sharing là où est mon amour? |
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DancinQueen![]()
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
hey ![]() ![]() -=Kiley **You can't always trust the people you want to** |
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Shmurfkins New Member
since 2002-01-29
Posts 5the state of confusion |
I like this Jenn. I haven't read anything from you in awhile...shoot, I haven't read poetry in awhile. it's a nice piece to come back to. I think I know who you're talking about in here, but...I'll keep my mouth closed. btw, thanks for being there for me oh so many months ago. I really appreciate it ![]() ~Stace WHOOOOOOOOOOO LIVES IN A PINEAPPLE UNDER THE SEA? SPONGEBOB SQUAREPANTS! |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I understood this one very well. It hit home for me and i like poems that do that. well done ![]() This message has been brought to you by the letter 'Y' |
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Jenn Cirrincione![]() ![]()
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
I hate my life sometimes. ![]() Thanks for everyone's replies. ![]() Why is it that we are at our most ingenius only when trying to destroy the things that keep us alive and thriving? |
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Acies![]()
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Don't we all? ![]() là où est mon amour? |
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