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Teen Poetry #5

Open up Your Hate

Demonic Illusion
Member

since 2002-02-07

Posts 50

0 posted 2002-04-18 04:54 PM

Drowning in my sea of loathing.
Push me again open my madness.
Can't take much more of this.
Fall upon my knees find a way to survive.
        Better just leave me alone.
        Better just get outta my face.
        Open your mouth open my hate.
        OPEN YOUR HATE OPEN MY RAGE!
Battle this feeling to the bitter finish.
And in the end there's nothing but memories.
World around me so blind to what they see.
Reality hits and consumes the rage with sadness.
        Better just leave me alone.
        Better just get outta my face.
        Open your mouth open my hate.
        OPEN YOUR HATE OPEN MY RAGE!
Set your mind at ease leave me in peace.
I look out the window all I see is the hate today.
Unleash the beast in me and in the end you will see.
I've been pushed as far as I can go.
There's one thing you should know in the end.
        Better just leave me alone.
        Better just get outta my face.
        Open your mouth open my hate.
        OPEN YOUR HATE OPEN MY RAGE!
        OPEN YOUR MOUTH SAY NOT A WORD!
        UNLEASH MY RAGE UNCAGE MY HATE!

Demonic Illusions, Frostic Dragons, Bloody Tears From Me To You....all surround by a force of Untouchable Darkness

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

1 posted 2002-04-18 07:07 PM

Strong piece and awesome job expressing all your feelings here....i loved it..reminds me a lot of how i feel...wonderful job

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

keoni
Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 850
Up in the mountains in the NFC

2 posted 2002-04-19 12:42 PM

This is the type of poetry I like reading. This one was really good. I think this is the first I've read from you. I'll be looking for more. Nice job
Jon

"Only God can judge me" Tupac Shakur
"Sometimes it takes a painful loss to realize you are free"- Bouncing Souls

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