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Pain in Regret
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Pain in Regret |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC 
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As I watch the waves crash below I give it up and I just let go Throw my worries to the sea One day they'll flow back to me With all the troubles that one man faces There has to be a few he erases You can't look all problems in the eye Let them drift away as the wind blows by Chorus: There's no consolation in constant frustration I was waiting for a way out but I'm done being patient Sending all my troubles to go splashing in the water There's only pain in regret so why even bother Pain is an addiction we all must someday feed But to live my life in misery is one memory that I don't need Guess you could say that I'm the type to dwell in the past So when I'm stuck in this situation don't need to think about the last Trapped under this water and I need to gasp for air And I can't find no comfort in living in despair I'm gonna toss my cares into the next swell Let the ocean quench this burning hell (Chorus) Digging my seat into the sand I gave myself my own helping hand Soaking in the sun, basking in my rays I finally shine a little brighter these days I have no issues, I have no qualms Everything is great where I'm looking from Each set of waves crashing down I wonder if it'll be The one that brings all my problems crashing back down on me (Chorus) Hey everybody, this one's intended to be a song, in case you couldn't tell "Only God can judge me" Tupac Shakur |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Yup, i could definately tell this one was a song. I enjoyed it a lot...the verses were good and it flowed really well. Thanks for sharing this! iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf.. |
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chasing rain Senior Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 737Canada |
Oh wow...this has got to be one of the best written songs I've read on Pip. It could even hear it as I read it, before I even knew it was intended to be a song! The flow of this was just awesome! Awesome awesome awesome! And yes, I am in awe... Super work here! Most excellent! -Leah |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
Thanks for the replies. Uh, I'd say something else but I have a plane to catch. I've been in Michigan and now I'm going, going back back to Cali, Cali Jon "Only God can judge me" Tupac Shakur |
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