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Dunphy
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0 posted 2002-04-11 11:32 AM


life can bring so many suprises
you got to through away your dusquesess.
then you can put a smile on your face\pray an thank god you have grace.
now you realise you have a heart
it will heal an not to be apart.
you realise you got love
but some times it seems to be rough.
all the stress time to shove
god sent you from above.
we are on earth for a test
now it's time to relax an rest.


by dunphy

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1 posted 2002-04-11 11:54 AM


Ur grammar is kinda different in this one!! not the same old kev style we're use to I enjoyed this a lot hun!! Thanks for sharing

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

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2 posted 2002-04-13 04:01 PM


you're so good at this love ya!
robin

i am me don't tell me different!!
JEFF IS ONE HOT STUD *RAWR*
i want him *DROOLZ*
dam hes hott!!!

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3 posted 2002-04-13 08:53 PM


"we are on earth for a test"
you are so right
and I think you are gonna do just fine

this is awesome

HiddenSparklez
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4 posted 2002-04-14 02:31 AM


great perspective on life... keep writing!

"You do what you do, you say what you say, you try to be everything to everyone... come on now, do that stupid dance for me" -Everclear

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