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PurplePeopleEater
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0 posted 2002-04-10 09:41 PM


i thought of this because of the feelings my friend told me she had for someone

The Most Misunderstood Feeling Ever

I think I love you but I’m not sure
Everything seems to be a blur
I can’t control my feelings for you
I wonder if you feel like this too

It feels right, it feels wrong
I know I need to stay strong
As long as you’re near
There is nothing I will fear

I think about you day and night
I want to wake up next to you in the morning light
Will you stay with me?
Will we ever be?

I need you, I want you
The feeling is so new
Can I call you mine?
Maybe then my heart would be fine

I think I love you but now I know
Everything between us seems to glow



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1 posted 2002-04-11 01:19 AM


*sigh* yes, love IS the most misunderstood feeling ever. Good write!
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2 posted 2002-04-11 02:24 AM


*sigh*

What a lovely piece. Very true... love is very hard to understand. It takes a lot of paitience, strength, and maturity. These lines in particular:

"It feels right, it feels wrong
I know I need to stay strong"

I enjoyed.

~
Titus

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3 posted 2002-04-11 01:09 PM


Very true
'I need you, I want you'
these feelings are so unclear is it lust or love? I think that you only know if you love someone if you lose them or have something to compare it to, so we should live each feeling as they come.
Great write and so true.
God Bless
Clare

Life is about change,sometimes its painful,sometimes its beautiful,sometimes its both.

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