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Teen Poetry #5

stephanie

quietlydying

Senior Member

since 2001-06-10

Posts 935
the wonderful land of oz

0 posted 2002-04-09 10:55 PM

Sometimes you make me
wonder.
Pursed lips
[a scowl and a murmur]
dance around
and around
in circlesneverending.

Sitting in the dark,
I watch your eyes
[a foreign film without
subtitles] and ask
myself,

What do I see?

/jen/

[This message has been edited by quietlydying (04-09-2002 10:56 PM).]

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

1 posted 2002-04-10 12:05 PM

Interesting. I'm not sure how to respond to this, but it's interesting!

I am a geek!!

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

2 posted 2002-04-10 11:46 AM

I watch your eyes
[a foreign film without
subtitles] and ask
myself,

What do I see?

That part was absolutely awesome!! Sometimes its hard to read people but i guess thats part of what makes life so interesting and people so mysterious at times. Great poem!

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

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