for the one that stole my heart

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punkrockerrobin

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since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

0 posted 2002-04-08 12:56 PM

for the one that stole my heart,
and and never gave it back.
i am still hurting cus,
you left me all alone with no one to call my own.

for the one that stole my heart,
i still love you!
and i always will.
there are nights i think of you
because i still love you.

for the one who stole my heart
i will always love you
but for now i am in pain
because i am loving you
but i'm all alone

for the one that stole my heart...........

i am me don't tell me different!!
JEFF IS ONE HOT STUD *RAWR*
i want him *DROOLZ*
dam hes hott!!!

Kielo
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since 2002-02-11

Posts 1109

1 posted 2002-04-08 05:15 PM

This was well-expressed. Your feelings are raw and obvious. The best way to write a poem. Hope all goes well with you.

Kielo

I LOVE YOU! *kisses you* hehehe...

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2002-04-08 06:42 PM

For the one who stole my heart
give it back won't you please?
I can't stay down here
down upon my knees

For the one who stole my heart
I know I gave it free
but this ache is unending
in this revere

For the one who stole my heart
I'll love you endlessly
but please give back what you've broken
give it back to me.....
Robin!
you are so inspiring

loved your poem sweetie

BrokenAngel
Member

since 2002-01-06

Posts 141
Puryear, TN, USA

3 posted 2002-04-08 06:48 PM

Wonderful!! I feel your pain. Dang, that sounds weird, o well, loved it any ways!!! Good luck!!!

~*~*~Night Angel~*~*~

punkrockerrobin

Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

4 posted 2002-04-09 04:20 AM

tks everyone just someone i can't get over and now he wants to be friends and meet me when i go to college i dunno if i can handle it.

i am me don't tell me different!!
JEFF IS ONE HOT STUD *RAWR*
i want him *DROOLZ*
dam hes hott!!!

quietlydying

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since 2001-06-10

Posts 935
the wonderful land of oz

5 posted 2002-04-09 10:37 PM

i love this type of poem [when done well].

you did a great job with it.

it wasn't too repetitive in the least.

thanks for the read.

::applauds::

/jen/

so foul and fair a day i have not seen. - macbeth act 1, scene 3

See me?
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since 2002-02-13

Posts 93
UK

6 posted 2002-04-10 08:51 AM

I can relate to this, good writing and I can feel the pain your feeling. Keep fighting.
God Bless
Clare

Life is about change,sometimes its painful,sometimes its beautiful,sometimes its both.

CwboyAtHeart
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since 2001-04-14

Posts 541
Selah, WA, USA

7 posted 2002-04-10 07:07 PM

Very good poem, Robin. I liked this one, great job.

      - Cody -

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Skyfire

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since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

8 posted 2002-04-11 12:55 PM

Oh Robin.

What can I say? It's great! Genuine, from the heart, and well expressed. You're going to be fine, hun. I know you will

I am a geek!!

punkrockerrobin

Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

9 posted 2002-04-15 06:39 PM

my rhonda!!!!! where the heck have you been i have such good news for you!!

i am me don't tell me different!!
JEFF IS ONE HOT STUD *RAWR*
i want him *DROOLZ*
dam hes hott!!!

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

10 posted 2002-04-18 04:37 AM

Robin-
This is a very well-written piece.
You've done a great job of expressing
your emotions, and I felt it as I read.
Nicely done!
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

xShUgArHiGhx

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since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

11 posted 2002-04-18 01:28 PM

I am sorry that the one who stole your heart left you all alone

I hope you find companionship

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

punkrockerrobin

Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

12 posted 2002-04-20 02:45 PM

tks everyone. well he didn't leave me alone we are still friends he just stole my heart that's all.

i am me don't tell me different!!
JEFF IS ONE HOT STUD *RAWR*
i want him *DROOLZ*
dam hes hott!!!

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