Teen Poetry #5 |
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Individuals conforming |
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LCBS Senior Member
since 2001-11-29
Posts 532Connecticut |
Look around your school today Memorize these faces Look at the life that thrives here That all the world embraces Then take a closer look to see That we are all the same Born with individuality But lost into this game Should we really have to change ourselves Trying to be "unique" Model all our perfect bodies after one unattainable physique We are the same here Individuals conforming And living life to its "fullest" All the while just performing So take a look around today and don’t see another face Because we are ourselves and nothing more Deteriorating to fit this place |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
this is too true....sadly ![]() ![]() |
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since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Wow lisa...great job on this one!! You really have me thinking now...i guess i dont recognize the differences of us all. It is true though, we spend so much time trying to become unique that we dont realize we really already are. iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf.. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Lisa- Excellent write! You've said it well! There is much truth and wisdom in these words. Very well done! ![]() Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Demonic Illusion Member
since 2002-02-07
Posts 50 |
that was great...you dont live in missouri do ya cuz thats all that goes on here nobody likes change or to be different here Demonic Illusions, Frostic Dragons, Bloody Tears From Me To You....all surround by a force of Untouchable Darkness |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
Excellent write. I have always been a very strong opponent of conforming. This was a great poem. I wish I saw more like it around here. jon "Only God can judge me" Tupac Shakur |
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