Sweet, Sweet Love (a sonnet)

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Sweet, Sweet Love (a sonnet)

CwboyAtHeart
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 541
Selah, WA, USA

0 posted 2002-03-30 10:25 PM

Hello.  I haven't been writing for a while, and I finally decided to write.  I've been reading Shakespeare a lot lately, and I decided that I'd try to write a sonnet.  I dont know how it sounds, so I'd appreciate if you guys would let me know.  Thanks!

SWEET, SWEET LOVE

Love!  Has such a sweet and amazing taste
Yet it slowly turns bitter as it fades away
A wonderful thing when it comes without haste
Longing for once in my life the sweetness stay
Imagine us running in a garden of roses
The same is love, The thorns are so abject
We live to love, yet there are so many opposes
Why!  Tell me why this world must object!
Is not life supposed to be golden?
Maybe this life I live is not meant to be so
I get no support!  Nodody will embolden
I will continue to pray I will see Love's sweet glow
   Even with the objections, Love will shine through
   And when I get that taste, I'll know Love is true

      - Cody -

Note To Self:  If Pigs Can Fly, So Can I!!!

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punkrockerrobin

Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

1 posted 2002-03-31 01:18 AM

great sonnet hun really good. love ya *muwa*

i am me don't tell me different!!
JEFF IS ONE HOT STUD *RAWR*
i want him *DROOLZ*
dam hes hott!!!

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

2 posted 2002-04-03 01:46 AM

very sweet and cute

hehehe good job cody!

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

ericaisamonkey
Member

since 2002-04-04

Posts 51
A little town north of nowhere

3 posted 2002-04-04 03:58 PM

Good job cody. This is kind of romantic, but deathly scary at the same time. you did a nice job of mixing the two together.

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