Teen Poetry #5 |
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Coca-Cola Makes The World Better |
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Allysa![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden ![]() |
You sit next to me in freshman hall, stealing Cole's chips, my sandwhich. You throw orange peels in my hair to make me laugh. You mimick Victoria when she talks about Kroger's and the "ditch" outside of Skateworld. You try to steal my bagel, but it finds it's way to my mouth. You squirt a Hi-C juice box on me, and apologized for no reason. You sit next to me and laugh with me and I can't help but think that Coca-Cola makes the world a better place. [This message has been edited by Allysa (03-18-2002 07:39 PM).] |
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Kielo Senior Member
since 2002-02-11
Posts 1109 |
AMEN! Pepsi sucks! hehehe... (That was my intelligent thing I had to say... don't say a word! I don't want to know about how unintelligent it was. If I say it was intelligent, then it was. Ok? Good.) I liked the way the poem was written. Just a bunch of people hanging out. Very much like some people I know... Not myself... we do it differently... we're a different bunch of people, my friends and I... lol... Very cool. |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
I like this... it's very charming and simple.... as are some of the most precious joys in life. ![]() "The most beautiful makeup for a woman is passion, but cosmetics are easier to buy." - Yves Saint Laurent |
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Allysa![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
Thank you both. Kielo, you remind me of a friend of mine. Don't let your mind wander, it's much to small to be out by itself. |
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since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Hehehe very cute!! Coca-cola baby!!! iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf.. |
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Kielo Senior Member
since 2002-02-11
Posts 1109 |
Really? Do I know you? .... That would be extremely weird... lol... Tell your friend I say hi. ![]() |
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Skyfire![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Well even though I am a firm believer in Pepsi, I say this was very well-written. Very... I don't know, I just like it a lot! |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I used to like Pepsi, now I'm a Coke person myself ![]() là où est mon amour? |
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Jenn Cirrincione![]() ![]()
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
And who?? is that I see?? hehe Thought you could sneak around un-noticed my dear? ![]() ![]() This was a cute poem, very cute. Not a fan of soda myself really, but I don't think that's truely the point. hehe Simply sweet. Jenn "I can't get you out of my head- your love is all I think about." |
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