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Allysa
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0 posted 2002-03-18 07:39 PM


You sit next to me in freshman hall,
stealing Cole's chips, my sandwhich.
You throw orange peels in my hair
to make me laugh.
You mimick Victoria when she talks
about Kroger's and the "ditch" outside of Skateworld.
You try to steal my bagel,
but it finds it's way to my mouth.
You squirt a Hi-C juice box on me,
and apologized for no reason.
You sit next to me and laugh with me
and I can't help but think that
Coca-Cola makes the world a better place.

[This message has been edited by Allysa (03-18-2002 07:39 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-03-18 07:56 PM


AMEN! Pepsi sucks! hehehe... (That was my intelligent thing I had to say... don't say a word! I don't want to know about how unintelligent it was. If I say it was intelligent, then it was. Ok? Good.)

I liked the way the poem was written. Just a bunch of people hanging out. Very much like some people I know... Not myself... we do it differently... we're a different bunch of people, my friends and I... lol... Very cool.

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2 posted 2002-03-18 09:24 PM


I like this... it's very charming and simple.... as are some of the most precious joys in life. Personally I hate drinking any kind of soda, but I like the message. Thank you for posting this.

"The most beautiful makeup for a woman is passion, but cosmetics are easier to buy." - Yves Saint Laurent

Cela passera.

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3 posted 2002-03-25 03:49 PM


Thank you both.

Kielo, you remind me of a friend of mine.

Don't let your mind wander, it's much to small to be out by itself.

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4 posted 2002-03-27 06:13 PM


Hehehe very cute!! Coca-cola baby!!!

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

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5 posted 2002-03-27 06:21 PM


Really? Do I know you? .... That would be extremely weird... lol... Tell your friend I say hi.
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6 posted 2002-03-28 05:01 PM


Well even though I am a firm believer in Pepsi, I say this was very well-written. Very... I don't know, I just like it a lot!

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7 posted 2002-04-19 12:38 PM


I used to like Pepsi, now I'm a Coke person myself

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?
Nelly Furtado é a menina a mais bonita no mundo largo do todo.


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8 posted 2002-04-20 02:26 PM


And who?? is that I see?? hehe
Thought you could sneak around un-noticed my dear?

This was a cute poem, very cute. Not a fan of soda myself really, but I don't think that's truely the point. hehe

Simply sweet.
Jenn

"I can't get you out of my head- your love is all I think about."

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