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quietlydying
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the wonderful land of oz

0 posted 2002-03-17 10:58 PM


Puree between
the chipped and broken bone.
cracklepopandgrind.
Hollowing out
with a
rusty ice pick
and a
molded personality.

Devour my flesh...
caustic voices
steal my reason.

I wish I could step you down.


/gwen/


so foul and fair a day i have not seen.  - macbeth act 1, scene 3

[This message has been edited by quietlydying (03-18-2002 05:22 PM).]

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ShortSexyAngelOnEarth
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since 2001-12-24
Posts 36
im a louisiana cajun princess! lol
1 posted 2002-03-17 11:12 PM


whoa...... im a blonde, and i must be stupid, cause that went over my head. could u explain it to me? lol, SORRY!
Dark Enchantress
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Posts 1258
meet Morgana
2 posted 2002-03-18 04:14 PM


I really missed seeing your poems here. Not that I've been posting myself, but I've been poking my head in for a look every now and then. I love the things you write. It's a style all your own. It's raw, dark, beautiful, and always honest. Thank you for posting this.

Me


"The most beautiful makeup for a woman is passion, but cosmetics are easier to buy." - Yves Saint Laurent

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