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Teen Poetry #5

bear with me...

quietlydying

Senior Member

since 2001-06-10

Posts 935
the wonderful land of oz

0 posted 2002-03-17 06:57 PM

as i work my way back into writing after several 'blocked' blah months.

here goes...

Ageless smiles
wither away
into the
cold, crisp
dirty winter -
as
once again I shroud
my Infidelity
in YOUr open arms.

/jen/

so foul and fair a day i have not seen. - macbeth act 1, scene 3

Lennon2002
Junior Member

since 2002-01-10

Posts 31
The wV

1 posted 2002-03-17 08:31 PM

as you stay blocked...my thoughts flow...and become locked..

I'm ready for death because I don't believe in it- John Lennon

LCBS
Senior Member

since 2001-11-29

Posts 532
Connecticut

2 posted 2002-03-17 08:32 PM

This was written very well..,.I like it...I dont think you have "the block" (dun dun dunnnn) at all

Great Write

~Lisa

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

3 posted 2002-03-18 10:17 PM

"once again I shroud
my Infidelity
in YOUr open arms."

In its simplicity it had a lot of meaning. Your format is still there...I like it.

"Dont piss me off, Im runing out of places to hide the bodies."

[This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (03-18-2002 10:19 PM).]

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