Teen Poetry #5 |
Stabbing pains |
LCBS Senior Member
since 2001-11-29
Posts 532Connecticut |
Today I felt the worst pain that my heart has ever known Today it did not matter all the "love" for me you've shown Today you stabbed me in the back, made my soul bleed out Today you killed a friendship, blocking out my silent shouts Today when my back was turned, and my mind was elsewhere Today you crept behind me, I did not know that you were there Today you jabbed the knife right through my very back Today you hit my heart hard, now you own everything I lack Tomorrow maybe I will recover Tomorrow maybe You will see Tomorrow I will pull the knife out Tomorrow you will hurt, not me ~Lisa |
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Lennon2002 Junior Member
since 2002-01-10
Posts 31The wV |
Nice I'm ready for death because I don't believe in it- John Lennon |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
::hugs::...sounds like a very rough day..dont worry girl, you'll get through this..keep ur chin up iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf.. |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
YOU GO LISA!!! an awesome write lisa, sounds like no one should be messing with you. its awful knowing that your close friend backstabbed you, but its great knowing that youre not letting it pull you down. go for it girly, if need be deal out what they deserve for hurting you like that. (not that it has to be physical violence in anyway ) loved the read-angry as hell Zombie |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
People suck, aye? Sorry to read you had such a crappy day. If anything now you know what this person is capable of. I recommend Kero and a match with a combination of her and a house. Good imagery with the knife and great expression of your feelings. Thanks for the read. Hope things improve for you. ~AF~ "Sometimes the only way to stay sane is to go a little crazy." - Susanna Kaysen |
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TigerZ Member
since 2002-01-02
Posts 83Ontario, Canada |
I dont know what to say....other than make her see how much it hurts and great write! I hope things get better A life without loveā¦is no life at all. |
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LCBS Senior Member
since 2001-11-29
Posts 532Connecticut |
Box of matches it is... (strikes first match, it goes out....) (Does the same with three others....) DAMNIT!!!! ~Lisa |
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