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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA 
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This is stupid..I apologize makes no sense but what does anymore? Lost in confusion Rainbow lost No longer found Within my dreams Listen to me Tell me Explain yourself Who are you Where do you come from And what do you Intend to do to with my heart? Not quite sure How much longer I can endure This thorn That pierces my soul This rose I hold within the palm of my hands I'm close to letting go Let it wither Let it die Amongst the coldness Found within my eyes Please explain yourself Before I truly give up And force myself to close up my soul And force my heart to say goodbye... |
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LCBS Senior Member
since 2001-11-29
Posts 532Connecticut |
Hmmmmm....this look familiar Kris!!!! Hey _____= _______ Thats all you have to remember! I've already told you everything I thought....this jsut comes from the heart, so its perfect... ~Lisa |
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PoetryIsLife 
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
Kristen  Enjoyed the write. As usual... you have a superb ability to put your emotions into your poetry well.  Looking foward to the next time we chat...~ Titus In My Mind's Eye, In My Mind's Eye... [This message has been edited by PoetryIsLife (03-15-2002 12:00 AM).] |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
This seemed to make sense to me!  you always do a great job of putting your feelings and emotions into your writing. Great job as usual!iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf.. |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
I am sure this relates to a guy but it can also be a good analysis of yourself. The first half of the piece is excellently written with just enough questions and minimal answers. The way you delve into yourself and put it out for everyone to see is great. Thanks for the read. much enjoyed. ~AF~ "Sometimes the only way to stay sane is to go a little crazy." - Susanna Kaysen |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
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I like how you written this, VERY well done. "This thorn That pierces my soul This rose I hold within the palm of my hands I'm close to letting go Let it wither Let it die Amongst the coldness Found within my eyes" "Dont piss me off, Im runing out of places to hide the bodies." |
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