Teen Poetry #5 |
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I'm lost can't find my way. |
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Hallucination Member
since 2001-03-18
Posts 419 |
I’ve lost a lot of things in my life, But never anything this precious. And what am I left with, “memories”!! What did I do to deserve this? I can’t remember a single thing I did so wrong! It just started out of no where. From now on the road just keeps getting lon-ger. I’m lost can’t find my way. It’s getting harder to move, on Can’t figure out what to say. I can’t believe everything’s, gone I’m lost can’t find my way. Pictures, photos, is all I’ve got left, Can’t stop crying in my dreams. Though it’s a dream the tears, “are real” Their much more real they seem. The sunrise will not be the same no more! Everything around as chanced. A flower will not be the same as be-fore. I’m lost can’t find my way. It’s getting harder to move, on Can’t figure out what to say. I can’t believe that their all, gone I’m lost can’t find my way. So what do I do, Can’t figure out what’s true Where do I go, So lost I don’t know So what do I do, Can’t figure out what’s true Where do I go, So lost I don’t know I’m lost can’t find my way. It’s getting harder to move, on Can’t figure out what to say. I can’t believe that their all, gone I’m lost can’t find my way. |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Nicely done here Hallu........I enjoyed yet another song of yours. ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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anonymous albert ?![]()
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
enjoyed the the song ![]() im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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Fading Away![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Only 2 replies?? Wow! I can't believe that. This is a very well written piece. I enjoyed this quite a bit! Nicely done, I look forward to seeing more ![]() --Marie You can’t expect the roses to grow without the weeds. |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
Wonderful song, Hallucination. I liked it. ![]() |
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