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~*brittt*~
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since 2001-05-09
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East Haddam, CT

0 posted 2002-03-13 10:37 AM


~Please Don't~


Please don't tell me that you love me if you don't
Please don't tell me that you'll be there when you  won't
I don't need to hear the lies,
I don't need you [edited] with my mind,
So don't make me promises that you can't keep.

Please don't pretend you know me when you don't
Please don't tell me you'll listen when you won't
I'm tired of all the lying,
And I'm done with all the crying,
So stop pretending you're somebody you're not.

[This message has been edited by acire (03-13-2002 04:58 PM).]

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LCBS
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since 2001-11-29
Posts 532
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1 posted 2002-03-13 03:04 PM


This was really good, I hate when people think they know me, it always hurts when you find out they dont.

Great Write!


~lisa

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2 posted 2002-03-13 03:33 PM


I can relate to this rather well.
Great write!

krystlebabe19
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since 2001-11-09
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3 posted 2002-03-13 09:40 PM


Hey britt jsut wanted to tell u I lov this poem its sooo good I can relate to it alot right about now. Well keep it up hun lov ya
      
      ~Krystle


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