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Fade Away |
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Carly Maas Junior Member
since 2000-04-21
Posts 23Garden City, MI, USA |
When I'm with you, I feel like I could fly, When I'm not, I just want to die. I'm falling in love with you, and I'm falling hard, I don't ever want to see the day, When I fall too hard. When I see you walk into the room, My heart drops, My hands and knees start to shake, Please just make this feeling go away. When it's time to say good bye, I feel like I want to cry, I start to miss your embrace, and the smile on my face begins to fade. It's been a while since the last time I saw you, But your smile, your taste, and your embrace just don't seem to fade. Then I start to worry, When you don't walk through that door, The music doesn't amuse me, and my friends don't either. All I want to do is hold you close, Kiss your lips, and never let go. It's funny, Because whenever I think about kissing you, I get this feeling, and I know it, I'm in love with you. When I close my eyes, I can't see anything but you, I'm afraid to sleep at night, Because when I do, I dream about you. I just want to be with you, But do you want to be with me? Is all that I'm feeling just going to end up haunting me? I fear that I'll never see you again, I'll never forget the way you taste, I'll never forget your face, And I'll never feel your embrace. I just want to see you one more time, This time I'll be sure to tell you how I feel, I can't keep this inside, If I do, I fear it will all fade away. |
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Lisa_bebe15 Member
since 2001-11-15
Posts 151Florida |
I wrote one like that once..I know how it feels..my b/f is homeschooled and leaves me each day.."sighs" the pain of knowing I wont see him till tommrow is always there..the last kiss..and that walk to class..is hard.. "Water Over Matter" |
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Skyfire 
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Oh wow. Oh this is good. I dont' know what to say.  I want to die peacefully, in my sleep, like my grandfather, not screaming, terrified, like his passengers. |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
It's great. I've felt like that before.. in fact, right now.. The rhyme scheme could use a little work, but it's cool anyway.. Don't let your mind wander, it's much to small to be out by itself. |
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