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Carly Maas
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since 2000-04-21
Posts 23
Garden City, MI, USA

0 posted 2002-03-11 05:51 PM


When I'm with you,
I feel like I could fly,
When I'm not,
I just want to die.

I'm falling in love with you,
and I'm falling hard,
I don't ever want to see the day,
When I fall too hard.

When I see you walk into the room,
My heart drops,
My hands and knees start to shake,
Please just make this feeling go away.

When it's time to say good bye,
I feel like I want to cry,
I start to miss your embrace,
and the smile on my face begins to fade.

It's been a while since the last time I saw you,
But your smile, your taste, and your embrace just don't seem to fade.

Then I start to worry,
When you don't walk through that door,
The music doesn't amuse me,
and my friends don't either.

All I want to do is hold you close,
Kiss your lips,
and never let go.

It's funny,
Because whenever I think about kissing you,
I get this feeling,
and I know it,
I'm in love with you.

When I close my eyes,
I can't see anything but you,
I'm afraid to sleep at night,
Because when I do,
I dream about you.

I just want to be with you,
But do you want to be with me?
Is all that I'm feeling just going to end up haunting me?

I fear that I'll never see you again,
I'll never forget the way you taste,
I'll never forget your face,
And I'll never feel your embrace.

I just want to see you one more time,
This time I'll be sure to tell you how I feel,
I can't keep this inside,
If I do,
I fear it will all fade away.

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Lisa_bebe15
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since 2001-11-15
Posts 151
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1 posted 2002-03-11 06:01 PM


I wrote one like that once..I know how it feels..my b/f is homeschooled and leaves me each day.."sighs" the pain of knowing I wont see him till tommrow is always there..the last kiss..and that walk to class..is hard..

"Water Over Matter"

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2 posted 2002-03-11 06:35 PM


Oh wow. Oh this is good. I dont' know what to say.

I want to die peacefully, in my sleep, like my grandfather, not screaming, terrified, like his passengers.

Allysa
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3 posted 2002-03-11 08:26 PM


It's great.  I've felt like that before.. in fact, right now..
The rhyme scheme could use a little work, but it's cool anyway..

Don't let your mind wander, it's much to small to be out by itself.

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