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rubberband Junior Member
since 2002-01-04
Posts 26Will be half Swiss one day |
This is about my best friend, Who has been that since Grade Ten. She moved here in Grade Nine, To This home town of mine. She always believed that no one lived here Only to find out not to fear That this town is bigger than Spuzzum And smaller that Maezzum. Many friends did she meet And foes (I was one) lost to her in defeat. If it weren't for French 10 and rugby I doubt she would be my best buddy. But this girl, who is merry I thought once was scary. She is very funny And manges to act as "sweet as honey". One night she took a deathly fall Three days later her mom gave me a call. As she talked, it looked like a nightmare. I started to cry, because it was to much to bare. We all began to ponder, Even Turner did wonder, If she was going to make it, Or if death would start to nip. But because she is strong She made it to our prom. And this spring, without delay, Rugby she will play. I don't know where I would be If she were not a friend to me. And I am very glad That she is my Best Comrade!!! You are the best John!!!!!! Luv Tom Put your past behind you, not you past in front of you! |
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Lisa_bebe15 Member
since 2001-11-15
Posts 151Florida |
thats not really a poem I think..But its still really good..you got ur point across very well..good write! "Water Over Matter" |
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Skyfire 
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Oh it's a poem... Isn't it called a limmrick or something like that? Thank you Tom, mucho appreciated!  Definately saving this one!Love John I want to die peacefully, in my sleep, like my grandfather, not screaming, terrified, like his passengers. |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
This is a wonderful poem although I do wonder how it could be anything else. Anyway thank you for sharing these beautiful words with us  Andrew "The pin didn't drop it came and crashed down" |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
She was talking about me, you know Andrew. Cause it's Amers. She's Tom. And I'm John. Confused yet?  I know I am.  Thanks again Blake!I want to die peacefully, in my sleep, like my grandfather, not screaming, terrified, like his passengers. |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Yeah I knew  "The pin didn't drop it came and crashed down" |
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rubberband Junior Member
since 2002-01-04
Posts 26Will be half Swiss one day |
I am glad you like it. But tell me what is "poem". I thought there was many forms. Unless you are thinking of "comrade". some people don't purnouce the "e". Put your past behind you, not you past in front of you! |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
I don't pronounce the 'e'... GET BACK TO YOUR SCHOOL WORK!!!! I want to die peacefully, in my sleep, like my grandfather, not screaming, terrified, like his passengers. |
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