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Sweet revenge |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
This is to you my "friend", I wish upon you a sweet revenge. I dream to see tears form in your eyes, Or better yet i could beat you down w/ur lies. What if i destroy your self-esteem, I bet you didnt think i was capable of being so mean. One by one i'd pluck those perfect strands of hair from your head, Show you once and for all that ur not important and i rule instead. How would u like the agony to be? Mild, medium, scorching or to the extreme? My personal favorite is when you kicked me when i was down, So i give to you my permanantly attached frown. Oh yes, do you remember when you stole my soul? For that i give you hate with an unbareable hold. Today, tomorrow, yesterday and in a year, I hope you look upon me with your glassy eyes full of fear. Sorry sweet darling but u just cant win, So step aside as my fun is about to begin... iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf.. |
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LCBS Senior Member
since 2001-11-29
Posts 532Connecticut |
wow...remind me never to get on your bad side...But seriously, this was a great write and it showed the pain you are feeling....I liked it ~Lisa |
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See me? Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 93UK |
This is really powerful, although it sounds mean i no where you comming from, 'My personal favorite is when you kicked me when i was down' I liked this line because when you think someone is your friend and then they betray u in this way it hurts so much. Great post Clare x Life is about change,sometimes its painful,sometimes its beautiful,sometimes its both. |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
Amazing... Don't let your mind wander, it's much to small to be out by itself. |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
thanks everyone...i jus read it again and i was like...omg im such a...ehmm...you know what lol but im jus so angry at some people...ugh!!!!!!!!!! iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf.. |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Take revenge and take it to the fullist no matter what people tell you.I know the feeling and I agree with it completely.But anyway awsome piece I love it and keep up the awsome work. Lauren |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
Damn girlfriend  It was Amazing as usual..I can feel the anger seething from your words!!! It's scary isnt it after you re-read something..no but it's cool, I know how you feel..really I do..Love, Kristen [This message has been edited by Ceinwyn (03-07-2002 06:31 PM).] |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Booya! Go Michelle. *does a little dance* People see revenge as the wrong thing to do. I say fulfill the desire and make the person pay. They must have really screwed you around and for that they do deserve to get what's coming to them. Just a suggestion, you might want to write all the words out in full instead of shortening them. w/ur is what I'm talking about. It would look and read better. Thanks for sharing. Have fun.  ~AF~ ::Most people never listen:: |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Very interesting read I see you feel a lot of hatred for this person right now I just wish you let all emotions die down first then make your decision Hoping the best for you thanks for sharing là où est mon amour? |
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