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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA 
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The cigarette butts of Marlboro Lights in the sky,-- the silhouette of Orion, -- just another shoulder to cry on. Thus, I’m enduring cold nights. It’s two months since you’ve left me. Since the weather turned cold. Since the sunrise last caressed the horizon with warmth. At least, so it seems. Weaving the spider-webs of constellations, the muse of astronomy catches my gaze. Drifting off into space, I am losing my patience. People say that the cosmos is vast,-- but there’s nowhere to hide my sorrow when the moon, like a bookmark, sticks out of the time that’s long passed… Check out my poetry here: |
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See me? Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 93UK |
I can relate, good poem. love Clare Life is about change,sometimes its painful,sometimes its beautiful,sometimes its both. |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa |
aww man, i havent checked in on you in a while master, guess she got away well...it certainly makes for some of your best stuff love the last line peace |
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-Queth- Junior Member
since 2002-02-10
Posts 35Canada |
This is an incredible read. Simply charming! Thanks for sharing this! Q.u.e.t.h. Everything in between... [This message has been edited by -Queth- (03-05-2002 10:32 PM).] |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Heyy master! havent seen you around here in a while. Great piece and hope to see more from you  iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf.. |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
As per usual, excellent write, Master. I haven't read something of yours in such a long time that it's refreshing to see your face around here again. People say that the cosmos is vast,-- but there’s nowhere to hide my sorrow I could relate to those lines very well. The incorporation of Gods into the poem falls nothing short of brilliant. You always do that and it always scores high in my books. I enjoyed the read quite a bit. Can't wait to see some more. ~AF~ ::Most people never listen:: |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
I really liked this. Sad really...but quite decent in how it was written. Kudos to you..great to read jenn "You are the strength, that keeps me walking- you are the hope that keeps me trusting." |
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LCBS Senior Member
since 2001-11-29
Posts 532Connecticut |
Excellent write, a lot of deep hidden meaning that must be uncovered with careful reading...I liked it a lot...Thanks for the read! ~Lisa [This message has been edited by LCBS (03-09-2002 02:29 PM).] |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
Amazing |
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