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Teen Poetry #5

my muse..on holiday!!:P

Ceinwyn
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since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

0 posted 2002-02-26 06:54 PM

My muse is on holiday
Praying in the Mists of Avalon
Sending me her best wishes
So I guess
I have to fend for myself
My creativity
Starving for some inspiration
And my heart
Craving for your attention
I hope it's not too obvious
By the way
My heart stutters
And my soul races a marathon
When I hear from you
I know
It's all quite daft
She shouldn't have left
I guess she just wanted
Some solitude
And thought I could fend for myself
For a little while
Perhaps she noticed
All this time
That you were beginning
To intrude my mind
And decided that
Right now there
Isn't enough room for the both of you...

[This message has been edited by Ceinwyn (02-26-2002 06:55 PM).]

LCBS
Senior Member

since 2001-11-29

Posts 532
Connecticut

1 posted 2002-02-26 07:04 PM

Well if your muse has left, then send her on a permanent vacation, because you just gave us three great poems in 30 mins. I think someone has steped in your life to replace that muse *winks, nudges with elbow*....

Great Poem

~LCBS

Exeryone makes mistake, learn from them and move on, because tomorrow we'll make more...

Ceinwyn
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since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

2 posted 2002-02-26 07:09 PM

lol I know I'm on a roll..arrrrghhh no this can't be happening to me!! I so want to spill the beans but I don't want to end up kicking myself in the end

I tend to be fickle but this has been so weird that and I've been coming up with mad poems..hehe!! what is coming over me? it's definately all quite daft:P

Kris

LCBS
Senior Member

since 2001-11-29

Posts 532
Connecticut

3 posted 2002-02-26 07:19 PM

hey Im not one to jinx anything....but your "inspiration" is sure coming from somewhere, lol. Hey talk to me on MSN, or AOL (screen name Lilibed) and maybe I can get it out of you....

~LCBS

Exeryone makes mistake, learn from them and move on, because tomorrow we'll make more...

cherish
Senior Member

since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

4 posted 2002-02-28 04:37 AM

i liked this one loads..you write REALLY well...keep posting

Zombie

Torn are her limbs
By quiet hands that
Tug life(color) out of her.
Gnawing edges round
Into a broken(satisfying)
Shadow

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