Teen Poetry #5 |
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To Christine...Love Michele |
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xShUgArHiGhx![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Dear Christine: I look into your eyes, I see my reflection in the glassy tears. A mirror image of a depressed and lost girl, Waisting away in the "glorious" years. Reach my hand out to you, But u dont move a muscle towards my hand. Too tired to be lifted from your haze, You look at me hoping i understand. I do underdstand and thats the thing, I know where you are and where you've been. The feelings you've had and the tears your cried, The deceit, the sobs, and the roads you've taken. I know where it all leads, For i walked upon them too. I know the destruction life can cause a girl, Its happened to me as well as you. Cant you just take my hand, Put in a little more effort to try. If you lay your head upon my shoulder, I'll know exactly why. You dont need to explain in words, Your eyes speak a mile a minute. No one would know better than me, Because hun i've been in it. Please dont push me away, Dont decide to let it take over your being. And if you want to for a while its ok, But dont think you can do it without me seeing. Tomorrow will come and so on and so forth, You can refuse comfort and care. But theres nothing you can do to stop me, From always being there. Love, Michele iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf.. [This message has been edited by xShUgArHiGhx (02-25-2002 10:20 AM).] |
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LCBS Senior Member
since 2001-11-29
Posts 532Connecticut |
Wow....I know exactly how you and your friend feel...its amazing, I hope that your friend knows this...please give this poem to her. Its beautiful, and its so truthful... ~LCBS Exeryone makes mistake, learn from them and move on, because tomorrow we'll make more... |
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xShUgArHiGhx![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
I actually gave it to her right after i wrote it...i walked away so i didnt see her reaction but she wrote me a note saying how she starting bawling and how she loves me and she knows im what a true friend is etc..she agreed to everything i said and she forgets that i went through the same things...hopefully things will get better Thanks for reading! iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf.. |
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PoetryIsLife![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
What a great... love letter Shugah. ![]() ![]() Sincerely, The Titus ![]() The One, The Only... The Titus. |
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xShUgArHiGhx![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
thanks titus ![]() ![]() iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf.. |
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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
this was great hun. perfect timing for me to read because im going through something similar. its full of emotions and love. you wrote this excellently, stubmles and all ![]() ..tiff.. “A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.” |
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gracianna Member
since 2002-02-17
Posts 165A 14 year hell |
It's really sweet! |
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xShUgArHiGhx![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Thanks guys ![]() iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf.. |
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Child of the Stars![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
This was sweet indeed...I loved it ![]() ~Carly "Hey! The oven's on!" |
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xerxes Junior Member
since 2001-08-05
Posts 34 |
some roads are best traveled alone, but most journey's require a friend to the end. Beautiful piece. -Xerxes |
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luvnkris Member
since 2000-08-31
Posts 144Perth, Australia |
That was gorgeous! One of the sweetest poems I've ever read!! Keep up the good work.... Luv always Jo xoxo * never live a second without being grateful for all you have around you* |
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xShUgArHiGhx![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Thank you everyone for taking the time to read it and reply ![]() iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf.. |
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Jenn Cirrincione![]() ![]()
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Very Good. Twas sad...but very honest. Nice job. Jenn "You are the strength, that keeps me walking- you are the hope that keeps me trusting." |
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