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Teen Poetry #5

scared (but for the wrong reason)....

thedarkangel
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since 2001-05-12

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~*~the cutest~*~

0 posted 2001-07-10 03:48 PM

i hate it when you don't text me
i get scared when you don't call
every minute i don't hear from you
i really miss you more
sometimes it scares me
how much you mean to me
and if something had gone wrong
how bleak my life would be
i know sometimes it's lack of credit
or you had to do your art
you say it's good to express my feelings
i'm scared you'll break my heart.

Be honest and don't follow fads and fashion. do what you do and do it well ~*~jon bon jovi~*~

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

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with you

1 posted 2001-07-10 06:17 PM

this is very good

I like this a lot!

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

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San Juan, Puerto Rico

2 posted 2001-07-10 07:59 PM

Nicely done here. You really expressed yourself well.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

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3 posted 2001-07-10 09:23 PM

emotional poem...well done expressing it...enjoyed theread

im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

Spice
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since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

4 posted 2001-07-10 10:01 PM

Great write, Laura!

I know those same feelings.
You expressed yourself well!

CwboyAtHeart
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since 2001-04-14

Posts 541
Selah, WA, USA

5 posted 2001-07-10 11:24 PM

Great write! I really liked this one.

Good job!

- Cody -

If Pigs Can Fly, So Can I!!!

If someboy laughs at me, does that make me funny or just plain stupid?

Heavens Tears

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since 2001-03-15

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6 posted 2001-07-11 03:16 PM

Very emotional. I liked this one. Great job!

*Amanda*
I need more time to find the real me...
to fly like the birds... to be set free.

Fading Away

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Lynchburg, Virginia

7 posted 2001-07-15 09:47 PM

I thought this was pretty good. I know exactly how you feel. The first time I've ever loved, and ended up heartbroken. Love sucks somtimes...
Nice work, her. I really enjoyed this.

--Marie

You can’t expect the roses to grow without the weeds.

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