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inspiredpoetwriter
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since 2002-01-05
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0 posted 2002-02-19 10:19 PM



I did dis poem for a friend of mine who's goin through alot of {edit} right now she has not seen it but well ya know.... Bye!


The cuts
The burns
The pills
Wont stop your crying
Only a friend
Can do that.

The cuts
The burns
The pills
Wont calme your mind
Only a friend
Can do that.

The cuts
The burns
The pills
Wont stop your heart
Only a friend
Can do that.

The cuts
The burns
The pills
Wont heal your pain
Only a friend
Can do that.

The cuts
The burns
The pills
Wont take your breath
Away only a
Friend can do that.

The cuts
The burns
The pills
Wont shut out the shouting
Only a friend
Can do that.

The cuts
The burns
The pills
Wont bring your laughter
Only a friend
Can do that.

The cuts
The burns
The pills
Wont give you love
Only a friend
Can do that.



¥¤¥¤¥¥¤¥¤¥iM a PoEt WhO wRiTeZ Wit HeR Heart ¥¤¥¤¥¥¤¥¤¥

[This message has been edited by SEA (02-19-2002 11:21 PM).]

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SEA
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1 posted 2002-02-19 11:23 PM


nothing is ever quite as healing as the unconditional love of a friend and hurting yourself is never the answer this is a very nice poem for your friend you should give it to her....and remember, astricks in place of curse words, is not allowed.
Erin
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2 posted 2002-02-20 05:11 AM


Your friend will realize that you are a good friend once they read this!!! Hopefully everything will get better...

~ShAtTeReD mEmOrIeS,
aRe AlL i HaVe LeFt,
Of YoU aNd Me.~

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3 posted 2002-02-20 06:56 PM


Love and caring for someone has the power 2 do so much more than the other things and i hope your friend knows that or if not finds that out soon enough...strong piece keep em comin!

mE & cHrIsTiNe GaVe A WhOlE nEw mEaNiNg tO ThE wOrD "iNcOgNiTo"

Kandi
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4 posted 2002-02-20 09:57 PM


Wow - this was really powerful yet so simply put. I hope your friend gets better, and I hope she realizes what an amazing friend she has in you ((hugs))
~Kay~

The day you were born, you were born free
That is your privilege.

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5 posted 2002-02-21 12:09 PM


This was pretty powerful. I enjoyed the poem a lot. Hope your friends get well soon.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

sleepymoongirl
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6 posted 2002-02-21 07:23 PM


some things a friend can't heal
a friend can be there
a friend can listen
a friend can offer comfort
but sometimes someone needs someone who isn't a friend not an enemy but someone like a counciller to do that
when i was going through my depression my friends couldn't handle it because they didn't understand although i hope that you can be of help to your friend because its nice to have a friend along even tho they may not alwayz understand

as u go in life there will be ur hardships it is up to u if it makes u or breaks u.  

Voiceless
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7 posted 2002-02-22 02:27 PM


very powerful poem
well done
you are very right
only a friend...

Freedom is not Free (Korean War memorial)

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8 posted 2002-02-22 02:47 PM


This is a very well written and powerful poem. Glad I found it.

                            Dawn

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