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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA 
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Phantom of my dreams Menace of my thoughts Shadow of my imagination Image of pure perfection Your mysterious aura Drives my senses insane Flirting notions Fill my veins As if I drank the moon's potion Conjuring images Which play tricks on my heart It's all quite daft For you are a mere phantom A fancy of my trembling heart... |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"A fancy of my trembling heart..." what a cool line.... great poem  |
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C? Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 190 |
you fill your lines with such a grace, a pleasure to read! |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
amazing post...beautifully written mE & cHrIsTiNe GaVe A WhOlE nEw mEaNiNg tO ThE wOrD "iNcOgNiTo" |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
This was totally awesome. I love it.Pure poetry Jon "Only God can judge me" Tupac Shakur |
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Cinderelly Member
since 2001-12-31
Posts 189NM, USA |
This is a great poem! Very well written! Life is a moderately good play w/ a badly written thrid act. - Unknown |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
 Girl, you did it again. Grace with your words... well said! I loved it. A thoughtful, romantic, yet dark piece. Looking forward to the next one.  Sincerely, The Titus The One, The Only... The Titus. |
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