Teen Poetry #5 |
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best friend what i would do for you? |
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sleepymoongirl Member
since 2001-04-19
Posts 157bc canada |
so insecure you expect me to be strong for you you weren't there for me my problems were to much for you you will never know how much that hurt me that you turned me away when i most needed you you may feel bad i may tell you its ok it is ok but it hurts so much kind of like i wasn't worth the trouble but nothing will ever take that feeling away the feeling of uter most rejection the feeling that your best friend your *best friend* can't handle your problems now you want me there for you you never get how much you hurt me how very fragile i am the fear that it could happen again you never get how much i want to be there for you how much you mean to me how when you actually listen to me how much it means don't know what i have even done to deserve you locking me out i see your pain and it hurts me i want to wipe it away wipe away the pain for you which no one helped me with not even you not wanting you to feel the lost lonely feeling the feeling i felt knowing it could help us both grow a stronger bond like i still feel the feeling that i wonder if it will ever stop haunting me trying to be the friend that i have never had the friend i will never find for who would care about me i almost walked away feeling i had nothing left to offer nothing you could possible want i never seemed to be good enough for you you told me today that you loved me more then i would ever know that you would never pick another friend above me that having me in her life ment more to her then i ever did know how happy it made me to know my efforts were worth while not totally wasted i actually did mean something to her i had been so close to walking away how hard it had been to think i had failed yet again how close i had held her to my heart she understood very well what i have gone through we seemed to be a perfect fit my self esteem almost took away the friendship that has ment by far the most to me it was tearing me up inside the thought that her life might be better off without me that the people we hang out with could have done a better job then me not a single person in the world would i put myself through this pain for not another person i feel is worth it all this pain i've been through all these tears will hopefully only make us stronger can't believe i could ever be lucky enough to have a friend like you the love i have for you is uncoditional i will love you no matter what makes it harder through the rough moments but i know that your worth it |
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gracianna Member
since 2002-02-17
Posts 165A 14 year hell |
This is really nice...obviously you care for this person a lot. Do they realize this at all? I give a whole new meaning to the word 'sad.' |
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chas Member
since 2001-04-08
Posts 101Lynn, ma |
wow.. one of the many poems that i am gald to have took the time to read..i thank you for that.. |
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chas Member
since 2001-04-08
Posts 101Lynn, ma |
incase i wasn't clear before.. excellent poem.. |
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Kandi Member
since 2000-06-14
Posts 354North of Hell |
I really hope you let your friend read this...maybe she'll realize exactly how much you love her. Amazing job - don't give up on writing, or on your friend. ((hugs)) The day you were born, you were born free |
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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
wow scarlet this was just... great. very heart wrenching. all your feelings shine through with this. you did very well and im glad i caught it. miss you hun and hope everything is going well for you. im glad it worked out with this friend hun. best wishes always. *hugs* ..tiff.. “A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.” |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
like tiffers said...very heart wrenching...could tell that you wrote it with your whole heart...maybe you should show this to your friend...you wrote it and expressed yourself very well ![]() Zombie |
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