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0 posted 2002-02-17 01:17 PM



Companionship

The love I feel for you is so strong
I thought that it would never go wrong
We are the same as we were once
But you don’t love me as you did for those months
I try to deny my feelings by covering them
And the only way to express them is to write with this pen
I really want to move on
But at the moment you’re the one
When we’re together its really great
But I know for you it’s only as a mate.
I want to be part of your life totally and completely
But you don’t seem to feel the same as me
If I cannot have you I want to be the best of friends
You to be the one who cares and shares and lends
I want your love but not in bed
Because all that does is mess with my head
I’d love to just hang out with all of your mates
And not to be like going on dates
This is how I’m feeling and what I think is true
I will always love and never forget you.


© Copyright 2002 Clare Griffiths - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-02-17 04:37 PM


wow.....just wow..

~If u luv something, let it go,if it comes back 2 u, its urs, if it doesnt, it never wuz..~DMX

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2 posted 2002-02-17 05:06 PM


i like this poem.  it shows a lot of emotion. and thats where lots of good poetry comes from

Thank you for your time :shy:

when you live you die
when you die your forgotten
when your forgotten you truly die

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3 posted 2002-02-17 06:14 PM


See me,

This is a great poem. Exactly how I used to feel about someone, but I too have moved on.

                             Dawn

[This message has been edited by DawnG (02-17-2002 06:14 PM).]

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