The madness The frustration

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Teen Poetry #5

The madness The frustration

Deep_Inside
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since 2002-02-14

Posts 377
i can't stop hiding

0 posted 2002-02-14 04:22 PM

this is one of my first poems that i have written that doesn't ryme. i don't think i'll be doing this that much, to tell you the truth it kinda freeks me out well o hope you like it

the madness the frustration
that grips and stops time
a few words and then overflowing
emotions killing and hiding the real personality
inside a deep labyrinth of false truths and half lies
with an inescapable sense of forsakenness
and depression hanging over head
baring a constant hidden reminder
of the past bring pain and morbid ness
horribly mutilating and scaring
the inward body and soul
bring on pain of no source and no cure
finding moments of balance with only physical pain
and coming to the conclusion of only one way out
living in a world where they think they understand
and being pumped full of chemicals that totally hides it all
making the feeling of depression intensify
but hidden under this mask
spending hours in the dark inner mind
and with the decision made and keep a twisted path in order
with depression becoming a constant relapse
adding a new level to the labyrinth every time
finding moments of balance with only physical pain
and coming to the conclusion of only one way out
The madness, The frustration...THE END

Thank you for your time

when you live you die
when you die your forgotten
when your forgotten you truly die

LucidityNow
Member

since 2001-02-06

Posts 118
Canada

1 posted 2002-02-14 04:33 PM

wow, this is great. I am not sure what you intended it to be about, but i related to the drug problem i am having right now. I really liked this poem very much, good job.

and i'm certain that if i drive into those trees, it would make less of a mess, than she's made of me...

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