Teen Poetry #5 |
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Promise me |
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LCBS Senior Member
since 2001-11-29
Posts 532Connecticut |
Promise me... Promise me you will never go to bed hating yourself because what if you never woke up Promise me you will never go to bed with something to say Because you never spoke up Promise me You will live life to the fullest you will never regret you will look towards the future but you will never forget Promise me You will ask when you need me You will do the best you can You will realize your lucky You will try to understand Promise me... Promise me You will never go to bed wanting to die because you never know about tomorrow Promise me You will never go to bed With tears in your eyes Because nothing is worth your sorrow Promise me... Exeryone makes mistake, learn from them and move on, because tomorrow we'll make more... |
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TigerZ Member
since 2002-01-02
Posts 83Ontario, Canada |
=)cool...i absolutely loved this =) keep up the good work A life without loveā¦is no life at all. |
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JBaker515![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-02-28
Posts 458Dartmouth College |
this was special, i did enjoy it very much! Wonderful writing! ~~Jeff~~ |
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DawnG![]() ![]()
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
I hate having anyone go away from me mad cause you never know what tomorrow brings. If only everyone promised the things you wish for. ![]() I loved this poem and its message. Dawn |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
LCBS- This is very well penned, and such a warm and caring message as well. A wonderful write...much enjoyed. ![]() Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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xShUgArHiGhx![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
This was so good hun!! my mommy always told me not to go to bed angry...it brough back a lot of memories reading this mE & cHrIsTiNe GaVe A WhOlE nEw mEaNiNg tO ThE wOrD "iNcOgNiTo" |
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Devils Angel 666 Member
since 2001-11-30
Posts 71CT, USA |
Very good poem!! I should make on mf my friends read this. Has a strong message in it that everyone should read and know. Very good poem again. I liked it alot. Keep up the good writing!! ~Dan |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Im so used to reading about love & broken hearts that i thought this was gonna be one of those...I know im one to write about just that...But this was a really great poem!!! I hope to see more like this soon!!! ~ShAtTeReD mEmOrIeS, |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
I forgot to add this to my library... ~ShAtTeReD mEmOrIeS, |
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gracianna Member
since 2002-02-17
Posts 165A 14 year hell |
I likes this one... I give a whole new meaning to the word 'sad.' |
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