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LCBS
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0 posted 2002-02-11 04:55 PM


Why do bad things happen to good people
Why do only the good die young
Why does God take them away from me
Why are 3 young lives done

They were said to go to heaven
But he was unlucky enough to live
There were two other souls in that car last night
Whose parents may never forgive

Why does the person responsible
always live, to blame himself in the end
And then three lives are lost to accidents
2 from death, and one from sin

Why do bad things happen to good people
Why do only the good die young
Why does God take them away from me
Why are 3 young lives done

Why do I have to be the witness
to thousands of tears shed
Why do I have to look into haunted faces
And listen to whispers said

He was drunk, he was speeding, he was careless
But he's sorry can't you see
Look at the broken man he has become
before judging what he used to be

He took the life of his friends last night
and he took the life of his whole town
NOw his world will never be same as yesterday
Hes on an endless spiral down

Why do bad things happen to good people
Why do only the good die young
Why does God take them away from me
Why are 3 young lives done

This happened in my town recently, everyone greived for two lost lives, and blamed the survivor, but this kid will never be the same again, and if it was me I would rather die than be responsible for the deaths of 2 of my best friends....I dont know these kids, but I know that its been tough on everyone, and they should always look at all sides.

Exeryone makes mistake, learn from them and move on, because tomorrow we'll make more...

© Copyright 2002 Lisa Bednarz - All Rights Reserved
JBaker515
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1 posted 2002-02-11 05:01 PM


Why do good people write good poems?

This was great, and its tough to go through...this is a wonderful piece.

~~Jeff~~

HopelessRomanticGuy
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2 posted 2002-02-11 05:44 PM


This poem is great!  Why do bad things happen to good people?  It's something that always happens, sadly.  It's as if the universe wishes to test them, to find the chinks in their armour.  It's always a tragedy when this happens.  I am truely sorry, not for those who have died, but for those who must carry on.
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3 posted 2002-02-11 06:56 PM


LCBS,

This is a great poem. Do you have any way of showing or giving it to the survivor? I think they would appreciate it.
  
                                 Dawn

Voiceless
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4 posted 2002-02-11 07:34 PM


WOW

Freedom is not Free (Korean War memorial)

anonymousfemale
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5 posted 2002-02-11 07:51 PM


What a tragic event. You've written about it well. It is a shame that the town cannot have the same feelings towards it. Maybe you can do your little bit and when people start to talk about it, defend the guy. I'm sure it would make him a very happy person to know that someone out there is on his side.

Thanks for posting this.

~AF~

If this is all the world has to offer, I want a refund on my life.

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