Teen Poetry #5 |
Why II |
Devils Angel 666 Member
since 2001-11-30
Posts 71CT, USA |
Why does this have to happen to us? Why do you have to move so soon? Is God trying to tell us something? Is he giving us a test? If so I really hate this test. I know that I will always see you in school till the end of the year. But it will never be the same. I will never be able to talk to you as much as I would like to. I would never be able to spend as much time with you as I would like to. But this one thing I know. You will always be in my heart and I will ALWAYS love you with all my heart till the day that I shall die. I will make this work no matter what it means I will sacrifice myself to make this work. I will give 1000% and more to make it work. We will be together for all eternity. Don’t worry about loosing me. For I do not worry about loosing you. You have shone me a whole new world. You have shone me that there is more to life that what I had expected. You mean more than the world to me. I would do anything to keep you. I would do anything to show my ever growing love for you. Even though we will be miles apart Please know that no one will ever take your place. You will always be my love and I know that I will always be yours. I would do anything to keep you from moving away from me. This will work out if it kills me. I will make sure of it. |
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LCBS Senior Member
since 2001-11-29
Posts 532Connecticut |
I dont care how cliche this sounds If your really in love, distance wont matter....You;ll find a way to make it work ~LCBS |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
It's good to have a positive outlook and at the same time share it to the person giving your assurance thanks for sharing là où est mon amour? |
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HopelessRomanticGuy Member
since 2001-08-17
Posts 495LI, New York |
The poem itself is great, it sux that she is leaving. If you truely love her, and she you, then distance will only make that love stronger. Still, cherish the time you have. After Love comes Pain, then Love, Then Pain, then Love, then Pain..... does anyone else see a pattern here? Oh well, can't say it's not worth it. |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
Absence makes the heart grow fonder!! I'm sooo a firm believer in that Love knows no boundaries I don't care what anyone says..honestly if she were moving to mars and you were stuck wherever you'd still love her if it were meant to be..it's all good dun stress it Love, Kristen |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Good luck you two. Great poem. Dawn |
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Devils Angel 666 Member
since 2001-11-30
Posts 71CT, USA |
Thanks for all the positive reashurance you all. It means alot. |
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