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Devils Angel 666
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since 2001-11-30
Posts 71
CT, USA

0 posted 2002-02-07 08:49 PM



Why does this
have to happen to us?
Why do you
have to move
so soon?
Is God trying
to tell us something?
Is he giving us
a test?
If so I really hate this test.

I know that
I will always see you
in school
till the end of the year.
But it will never
be the same.
I will never be able
to talk to you
as much as I
would like to.
I would never be able
to spend
as much time with you
as I would like to.

But this one thing
I know.
You will always
be in my heart
and I will ALWAYS
love you
with all my heart
till the day that I shall die.

I will make this work
no matter what it means
I will sacrifice  myself
to make this work.
I will give 1000%
and more
to make it work.

We will be together
for all eternity.
Don’t worry
about loosing me.
For I do not
worry about
loosing you.

You have shone me
a whole new world.
You have shone me
that there is more to life
that what I had expected.
You mean more
than the world
to me.
I would do anything
to keep you.
I would do anything
to show
my ever growing
love for you.

Even though we will be miles apart Please know that no one will ever take your place.  You will always be my love and I know that I will always be yours.  I would do anything to keep you from moving away from me.  This will work out if it kills me.  I will make sure of it.

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LCBS
Senior Member
since 2001-11-29
Posts 532
Connecticut
1 posted 2002-02-08 05:31 PM


I dont care how cliche this sounds

If your really in love, distance wont matter....You;ll find a way to make it work


~LCBS

Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665
Twilight Zone
2 posted 2002-02-11 04:28 PM


It's good to have a positive outlook
and at the same time share it to the person
giving your assurance
thanks for sharing

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?
Nelly Furtado é a menina a mais bonita no mundo largo do todo.


HopelessRomanticGuy
Member
since 2001-08-17
Posts 495
LI, New York
3 posted 2002-02-11 06:12 PM


The poem itself is great, it sux that she is leaving.  If you truely love her, and she you, then distance will only make that love stronger.  Still, cherish the time you have.

After Love comes Pain, then Love, Then Pain, then Love, then Pain..... does anyone else see a pattern here?  Oh well, can't say it's not worth it.

Ceinwyn
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since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175
VA
4 posted 2002-02-11 06:23 PM


Absence makes the heart grow fonder!! I'm sooo a firm believer in that Love knows no boundaries I don't care what anyone says..honestly if she were moving to mars and you were stuck wherever you'd still love her if it were meant to be..it's all good dun stress it

Love,
Kristen

DawnG
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since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494
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5 posted 2002-02-11 07:00 PM


Good luck you two. Great poem.

                                 Dawn

Devils Angel 666
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since 2001-11-30
Posts 71
CT, USA
6 posted 2002-02-22 11:10 AM


Thanks for all the positive reashurance you all.  It means alot.
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