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Baby_Angel123
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since 2001-10-12
Posts 63
Unity, ME

0 posted 2002-02-06 01:55 PM


I don’t know what it is,
that attracts me so much,
to you.

Perhaps it’s the way,
you look at me,
or the way you say,
I love you.

Maybe it’s you’re touch,
that makes me feel,
so safe and worm,
or perhaps it’s your smile,
that lights up every room.

Whatever it is,
you make me feel weak,
and vulnerable inside.

Every time you’re near,
I am drawn ever so close,
and get completely lost,
in you.

What it is,
I do not know,
but whatever is,
it sure is powerful.
  


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Devils Angel 666
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since 2001-11-30
Posts 71
CT, USA
1 posted 2002-02-06 08:43 PM


I'm speechless my love.....
Very good poem I think.  Shows your feelings well

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